Recomposed from the lyrics of the Westlife’s Song – I cry, I wrote them when I was at high school
Here’s the song’s Chorus:
I cry
I cry,silently
I cry,inside of me
I cry,hopelessly
Cause I know I’ll never breathe your love again
And these are my recomposition:
I wait
I wait,patiently
I wait,for a certain fantasy
I wait,hopefully
Cause I know I will when I believe
I smile
I smile,happily
I smile,with the joy she gave me
I smile,perfectly
Cause I know I’ll win this game finally
I try
I try,seriously
I try,against the destiny
I try,continually
Cause you’ll see I always believe in me
I pray
I pray,silently
I pray,for the people who cares me
I pray,sincerely
Cause I believe we all will be lucky
I promise
I promise,undoubtedly
I promise,to achieve successfully
I promise,certainly
Cause I make the promise with great promise
Nar says she likes the first three paragraphs, me 2. And I like “I try” most.
what about you? my dearest readers….
it’s a love poem
come on tell more about SHE~~~~~~~~~~~~~i insist you write a novel~!!!!YEAH~~~~~~~~~~
I wrote them when I was at high school
….SEE?
Not a love poem only…
not only but also it IS a LOVE POEM!!!!!
i knew you did it long ago,and that’s why i ask you for a little lovely love story~~~~~~~~~~~
you’re requested now…
DON’T TURN ME DOWN~~~~~~~~~~~~~!!!!
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no mood to remind
no time to write
&
no she to find
o~~I admire myself~~another little poem~~
ps.这里remind的用法似乎不正确，vt.后面应该有宾语的，不过也许在poem中可以这么干
i think it’s ok^^
but you sounds a little blue= =
just stop talking about it
are you gonna be a poet?
no!
I won’t be the poet(I think it’s a crazy career..), Never!
……i think i could= =+++++++++